AW Lesson 9: Conclusion

Hi everyone, 
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Can you believe it?  We have now finished our entire first draft of our research papers!  The most difficult part of our course in now over. 

Concluding Paragraph:
In today's lesson, we looked at the different parts of a concluding paragraph:  thesis restatement, body paragraph summaries and a final thought.  The most important sentence will be your final thought; you want to leave the reader with a strong impression so that he/she remembers your essay. For your final thought, you can use the following types of sentences:
a.  prediction
b.  recommendation
c.  rhetorical question
d.  quotation

Homework:

1. Complete your Concluding Paragraph
2. Email your entire 1st draft by Tuesday, November 17 by 12:00 noon to ntakeda.aogaku@yahoo.com
3. Upload your first draft to the Aogaku database.
4. Print out two copies of your first draft and bring them to our next lesson.
5. Blog Post #5

Blog Question #7:

1. How do you feel after writing your research paper? What were some difficulties you had with your essay?
2. Was my feedback useful on your drafts? Give examples. 

• Write 10-12 sentences.
• Use capitalization, punctuation & spelling correctly.
• Submit by Wed., November 18 by 6:00pm