Hi everyone,
Can you believe it? We have now finished our entire first draft of our research papers! The most difficult part of our course in now over. Concluding Paragraph: In today's lesson, we looked at the different parts of a concluding paragraph: thesis restatement, body paragraph summaries and a final thought. The most important sentence will be your final thought; you want to leave the reader with a strong impression so that he/she remembers your essay. For your final thought, you can use the following types of sentences: a. prediction b. recommendation c. rhetorical question d. quotation Homework:
Blog Question #7:
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AW-Shinji
11/16/2015 08:51:34 am
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AW-Akimitsu
11/16/2015 05:29:15 pm
Q1, After writing my research paper, I think my writing skill is improved definitely. There are some reason. First, I could know some rule of English writing I did not know before take this class. For example, to use Romanji and Italic font, the way of seaching cite and quotation, and making bibliography and so on. I was not taught these information in my IE writing1 to 3. Next, this class has homework every week, so I must make some essay. In my IE writing homework about writing essay was not every week. Because the oppotunity of writing essay is increased, I have to think about writing essay. This chance was good for my writing skill.
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Nami
11/16/2015 07:23:57 pm
After writing my research paper I feel really relieved. I never thought I could be able to write such a long paper. I'm really a bad writer so I always hated to write papers. However, this time I always felt this feeling of fulfillment and that pushed me to keep on writing. Each time I send my parts of the paper it felt so good. Next time I'm writing a paper I think it will be easier for me to write it.
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AW-Saeko
11/16/2015 09:34:40 pm
Q1.
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AW-Mayu
11/17/2015 01:29:27 am
Hi Nicole,
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AW-Nanami
11/17/2015 07:20:20 am
1. It was difficult and needed a lot of effort to write my research paper by the schedule, but it was worth it when I saw my completed paper. I was writing it longer than I thought it would be. I felt really accomplished. Writing my concluding sentence was the most difficult part. I wanted it to be more creative, but I couldn't think of my best.
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AW-Kana
11/17/2015 06:07:35 pm
Hi Nicole,
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AW- Natsumi
11/17/2015 07:10:36 pm
Hello, Nicole
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AW-Nagisa
11/17/2015 07:56:58 pm
Hi, Nicole
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AW-Asa
11/17/2015 08:27:35 pm
Q1
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AW-Natsuki
11/17/2015 08:37:20 pm
Hi, Nicole
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AW-Rika
11/17/2015 10:32:51 pm
Hi Nicole,
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AW-Kanako
11/17/2015 11:00:13 pm
Hi Nicole.
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AWーKazuna
11/17/2015 11:07:30 pm
I felt great accomplishment after writing research paper. Every week, I had very hard tasks in Academic Writing. Therefore, I was very happy when I finished. However, I have some worries. First thing is words count because I had only 1080 words. I think I need more words. Another was content of my paper. I think my paper do not have critical content a little bit. Still I was helped a lot by teachers feed back when my hand stopped. Teacher's feedback gave me a way to complete my paper. So I am so grateful to you.
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AW-Yoko
11/18/2015 12:11:34 am
Hello, Nicole.
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AW-Taiki
11/18/2015 12:23:41 am
HI, Nicole.
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AW-Ayaka
11/18/2015 12:31:08 am
1. I'm surprised that I have finished to write my research paper already. I struggled with in-text citation. It was difficult to pick out suitable sentences from some novels, and use them in paragraphs with explanations to show the examples of my writing. Also always I have a lot of trouble with grammar and word choice when I write. Moreover, to summarize and paraphrase with synonyms was difficult for me.
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AW-Yuya
11/18/2015 01:00:31 am
Q1 To be honest, I did not like writing essay like this, because I am not good at writing. It was really hard for me to write more than 1000words, but it seems that I can get better writing essays. I learned that doing little by little is important when writing an essay.
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