AW Lesson 11: Conferences 1
Just two more weeks, and you'll be finished your research paper. You must be relieved!!
Peer Editing Discussions:
In the first part of our lesson, you discussed your peer editing activities with your partner. When you edit/revise your conclusion, you can use your partner's comments. Also, check corrections I've made in your research paper. You may have made the same errors in your conclusion.
For our lesson next week, I'll talk to the remaining students about your drafts. Make sure you prepare your questions because I'll only have about 5 minutes to talk with you.
Computer Room for Dec. 3:
For our conferences, we'll be in the computer room 217, so remember to bring a USB with your draft on it.
Next Week's Lesson:
In next week's lesson, you'll get the guidelines for the Final Draft, and I'll give you information about our course test on December 10.
Blog Question #9:
What advice did your partner give you about your writing in your peer editing discussions?
*Write 10-12 sentences.
*Use capitalization, punctuation & spelling correctly.
*Submit by Wednesday, December 2 by 6:00pm.
11/30/2015 11:56:22 pm
12/1/2015 06:32:49 am
My partner Mayu told me that my paragraph was logically organized and had good points. She also said that the use of transitions were good and the final thought was interesting. Those advices made me very confident of my research paper.
12/1/2015 06:35:39 pm
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12/1/2015 11:53:55 pm
Mainly, I was advised by my partner about a construction of a concluding paragraph, especially It was useful that the summary of body paragraph 1 was a little shorter than the other summaries. In the summary, I wrote that it is different between Robinson Crusoe and Gulliver’s Travels whether the location of the settings exists in this world or not. But I should have written about the number of settings are in one novel, too, because I wrote that topic in detail in BP#3. I could find the mistake due to my partner who check my paragraph carefully. Also, I thought it is very important that it has a consistency in a paper again through doing a peer editing task.
12/2/2015 12:14:07 am
12/2/2015 12:26:40 am
12/2/2015 12:56:04 am
My partner, Taiki, gave me a few advices. In my research paper, there're little many gramar mistakes. If I take care of it, my paper become better. I often make mistakes of the form of noun. To understand whether the word becomes plural form or not. The other advice was about my final thought. It wasn't interesting, he said. He gave me such advice that it's good to use sayings and so on. I think so, too. He said my summary was good, so I try to write easier and more interesting print.
12/2/2015 01:44:12 am
12/2/2015 07:14:26 am
I am so sorry for my late posting.
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