Hi everyone,
We had another busy Wednesday lesson, but there's just one more week to go and then we're finished our course! Peer Editing Discussions: In the first part of our lesson, you discussed your peer editing activities with your partner. When you edit/revise your conclusion, you can use your partner's comments. Also, check corrections I've made in your essay. You may have made the same errors in your conclusion. Conferences: For the remaining class time, everyone got a chance to meet with me to ask me questions about their first drafts. Fortunately, there was enough time to talk with everyone! Next Week's Lesson: In next week's lesson, I return your tests, peer editing tasks and final drafts of your persuasion essay. After, we'll have a fun writing lesson on texting in English. Homework:
Blog Question #10: (last one)
*Write 8-10 sentences. *Use capitalization, punctuation & spelling correctly. *Submit by Tuesday, July 21 by 6:00pm.
16 Comments
IE3W-Midori
7/18/2015 10:37:13 am
The most challenging part was writing an introduction and outline. As for the introduction, it was hard to think about interesting hook statements. As for the outline, I had many things to write so it is hard to organize them.
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IE3W-Chinatsu
7/18/2015 11:56:56 am
There was many challenging parts in thie course but the most challenging part was writing the outline of the essay. When I wrote the outline, I was always searching for the good information and also thinking of the structure of the essay at the same time so I had to write the outline logically with good information. However, once I wrote the outline, I could easily write the body paragraph or conclusion.
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IE3W-Shusei
7/18/2015 11:30:47 pm
The most challenging part of writing the essay was to stick to the dead line. It is quite a challenge when you faced with swarms of works. Other than that, to keep in mind what the style of the essay is. It is easy to digress all the time.
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IE3W-Takahide
7/19/2015 02:05:03 pm
The most challenging part of this course was to complete everything in english. Writing such a long amount of english was very difficult and made me tired. Also finishing each paragraphs on time was challenging too. One more thing was the in-text citation. For the first essay, I didnt understand how it worked so I wasnt able to use the citation. However, for the pesuation essay, I completed with citations .
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IE3W-Fumio
7/19/2015 05:15:28 pm
The most challenging part of the course was to keep up with the due every week. It was particularly hard when the essay just started and we had to think of outline. It was because outline decides the structure of our essay and is very important to have an organized outline beforehand.
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IE3W-Soichiro
7/20/2015 02:47:20 pm
What I found most difficult in this course was keeping up with everyone. I always had a hard time in understanding what we were doing during class, and found it hard to make my essays as well made as the others. It was my first time to write such long sentences in English, so that was also hard.
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IE3W-Mio
7/20/2015 04:17:44 pm
The most challenging thing was to get various sources from the web. It may sound easy but actually, it was difficult to find the exact-wanted source. I had to search a lot but glad I was able to find them and write my essay based on those.
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IE3W Nodoka
7/20/2015 04:52:04 pm
The most challenging part for me in this class was to do the peer editing for my partner. I couldnt find any mistakes for my partner for both of my essay. Also, it was hard to cite the information in my essay properly.
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IE3W Yuto
7/20/2015 05:02:57 pm
This may be a stupid answer, but the most difficult part of this course was definitely writing the essay. It was nice to plot out the essay and to learn how to write various types of essay, but it was not easy to write the essay itself. I faced various problems along the way, and I must say that this class have helped me improve on my writing skills. This leads to the answer for what was beneficial in this class. This class have taught me various knowledge for essay writing, which I will treasure.
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IE3-Kana
7/20/2015 05:13:32 pm
The most challenging part of my essay was that I had a really hard topic. At first I thought it would be easy to write about the revision of Article 9. But as I was searching for information online, I found different kinds of perspectives to think about the revision. Although it was hard for me to put those information into a neatly formed essay, it was a good chance for me to learn about the things that are happening around me today.
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IE3W-Aoi
7/20/2015 05:21:30 pm
The most challenging part of this course was writing essay itself. It was my first time to write complete essays. I think it was great opportunity to be able to be better at writing.
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IE-3 W Azusa
7/20/2015 05:27:17 pm
There were many challenges that I experienced through IE3 writing. The most hardest thing was making bibliography, because it was my first time to hear the word bibliography and MLA citation. It took sometime for me to understand how to make it.
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IE3-Aira
7/20/2015 05:50:26 pm
The most challenging part of this class was bibliography. At first, I couldn't understand what is it and it took me for a while to understand. I was confused and it was complicated for me. I also made a lot of mistakes.
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IE3W- Tomomi
7/20/2015 06:21:25 pm
The most challenging part of this course was writing a hook sentence. It was my first time writing it so it took a long time to come up with a good phrase.
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IE3W-William Haruki
7/20/2015 07:01:45 pm
1. The most challenging part of the course for me was the persuasion essay. This was mainly because of the fact that I chose a topic that was only slightly related to my interests. I found the classification essay to be much easier and enjoyable.
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IE3W Luke
7/20/2015 07:07:57 pm
The most challenging part for me in this course was to come up with what to write about. Though chosing the theme of the essay was not that hard, coming up with the details was hard for me. Especially the first essay was hard because in the second essay, you have a certain point of view to write the essay. However, you don't in the first one.
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